Hey guys, I started this as a place to get feedback on my work. My friends and such say it's good but I want to know what other people think. please give feedback. Positive feedback is great but, I can use criticism, too. Random thoughts are below, and poetry is in the sidebar. Thanks.
Tuesday, January 24, 2012
He tears out the hearts that won’t adore him.
She makes a noose from veins that won’t ignore him.
oh god i pictured it......sounds extremely painful.
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