Hey guys, I started this as a place to get feedback on my work. My friends and such say it's good but I want to know what other people think. please give feedback. Positive feedback is great but, I can use criticism, too. Random thoughts are below, and poetry is in the sidebar. Thanks.
Come Outside
When the rocks hit your window what will you do?
Come outside baby, I'm falling for you.
Run out and catch me. Please hold me tight.
I promise that I'll be gone by first light.
Will you stop and fall with me?
And help me drown this misery?
Our tears will join the pouring rain.
And maybe wash away this pain.
I promise I won't take much of your time.
I'll take care of your heart if you'll keep an eye on mine.
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Aww! Very sweet. I like it :).
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