Hey guys, I started this as a place to get feedback on my work. My friends and such say it's good but I want to know what other people think. please give feedback. Positive feedback is great but, I can use criticism, too. Random thoughts are below, and poetry is in the sidebar. Thanks.
Forget The Fakes
I'm done.
I take an inch for myself, you want a mile back.
But I'm finally having a bit of fun
And how come your friendship always lacks?
In almost every way
Except your drama and stories
Just go the heck away
You crap is starting to bore me
I've always been just a shoulder to cry on
Besides that, you never respected me
I was just a bleeding heart you could always rely on
But now you've all gone and killed that particular side of me
I'm finally thinking about me for once
That makes me a bad person?
Well then, what does that make you, Hun?
I'm sorry but I've run out of patience
I'm not the person I was before
That person died when all it brought was pain
But your the reason I'm not anymore
And all your whining is making me insane
Don't get all ticked that I've changed like this
My attitude now is what yours has always been
By the way I've found love in places you don't even know exist
I'll never fall for your lies again
Shout out to my real friends. You know who you are.
As for the Fakes... The worst part is most of you still think your great friends.
But yours is coming...
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