Hey guys, I started this as a place to get feedback on my work. My friends and such say it's good but I want to know what other people think. please give feedback. Positive feedback is great but, I can use criticism, too. Random thoughts are below, and poetry is in the sidebar. Thanks.
I See You Now, My Two Faced Friend
I thought our friendship meant to you
What it meant to me.
But now I see that this is not
What it ought to be.
Once you said we were the best kind of friends.
Once we were even more.
But I never did matter to you.
That’s never been so clear before.
You acted like you cared.
But when I looked away.
You showed how shallow you really are.
Hurting people this way.
You leave a trail of broken friends.
Cheated, ignored, betrayed.
You tell people that I’m no good.
But who are you to say.
I’m so glad you finally found the one.
Maybe now you’ll stop tearing people apart.
But next time you seek to criticize
Take a look inside your own heart.
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